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Kabeko the liar queen

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OOOF I LOVE HER I LOVE MY NEW CHILD
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here's some info my dudes!


name: Kabeko 

Nickname: Kabe

age: 10 (time skip 17) //this is her pre-time skip version-

Devil fruit: wall-wall fruit- its basically the ability to go through any wall and merge to any wall, kinda like links bracelet let him do in link between worlds

weapons of choice: A slingshot and some good ol' kickin'

misc- Child of Usopp and Sanji Vinsmoke

Backstory-
(BEFORE I START PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS IS STILL IN THE WORKS AND WILL BE EDITED SLOWLY)

Kabeko began her life as a small child on the Sunny, just following her parents around as they continued on towards their adventures to Raftel. The pirate life was all she had ever known, and soon as she grew older she became more and more interested in what future adventures could hold for her. She took up the habit of exaggerating everything that had occurred that day, from 100-meter tall sea dragons to huge mounds of gold. Soon everything she said was to not be taken seriously, but it was still fun to see her re-telling her fantasies.
However a bit after her 10th birthday, things began to change. She began to feel quite useless on that ship- She had no real talent except telling her grandiose stories, and even now they had lost their charm. She couldn't punch very hard with the strength of a 10-year-old, every time she tried to hold a sword she fell over, she didn't know how to properly read a map nor could she read very well, her kicking and cooking were sub-par, her aim was always off and everything she tried to fix or anyone she tried to help would always end up more broken or hurt. 
She felt utterly and completely useless, and when she had the chance to run, she took it. The crew looked for the girl desperately, but no sign was seen of her. She was gone from the crew, and there was nothing they could do but leave. Kabeko wandered for what seemed like days, with nothing but a bag of trinkets, a small slingshot, and the clothes on her back. She was tired, weary, exhausted, and most of all, depressed. From the minute she had left the ship to run she felt the guilt coursing through her veins, the terrible feeling of what her parents would think- But it was for the best, she would tell herself.

Fortunately, her wandering came to an end when she approached a small inn on a tiny cliff town, far from the city she had escaped in. The man working at the hour let her in and fed her, and let her sleep in a bed for the night for free. In the morning he began to ask her things, to ask where she had come from and where her parents were- and she began to talk, but not of the truth but of lies. She told him that her father was a well-to-do fish man, and wanting to take her somewhere nice for her birthday so she rode on his back toward the island but soon they were attacked by a mantigerfish, and she escaped safely to shore while her father was eaten up. The man knew Kabe was lying, but went with the story. 

The man himself, whose name was Finlet, knew that Kabeko had come from a ship, and a pirate one at that. Finlet himself was an ex-pirate and he was renowned in his pirateering days for his almost 6th sense of telling where a person came from- That was what made him so valuable to his own capital to which he was the first mate-
But when the captain and his crew were caught, they were given a choice due to their small bounties. Become a navy dog, or renounce the pirate life forever.
He had chosen the latter, but even as the years passed Finlet still kept his 6th sense. "You can take a pirate away from the sea, but you will never take the sea out of the pirate" His captain would say. 

It was the same case with Kabeko- The girl still had the sea in her. And as she kept making excuses to stay and to stay, he eventually gave up on trying to kick her out and gave her a permanent home as his foster daughter. Finlet had been made a hard and harsh man raised on the rocks, but he knew that for whatever reason the girl wanted to stay. And if she was that determined to stay, then he wasn't one to say no. He raised her as his own, putting her through rigorous cleaning regimens, teaching her to count, add, and subtract- He trained her every day till she was on the verge of collapsing, and he'd reward her every night with an egg and hot, gritty rice and a story of his travels.

Kabe loved Finlet and his stories, and as she grew older she grew even more greatful for what Finlet was doing for her.
But they both knew this would end. Kabeko was a young woman, and Finlet was an old man. Finlet had lost his desire for adventure, but Kabe was at her peak. Kabe would have to leave. As her 18th birthday neared, Finlet knew it was time to let her go. He had seen this unsure little girl grow into a motivated, determined young woman. 
With all of the funds he had saved over the years, he had a small ship built for her. And as she turned 18, he knew it truly was the time to let Kabe go.

TO BE CONTINUED IDK WHATS NEXTTT



thank you, everyone, I love my children and I love u too <33
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ISO Speed
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Date Taken
Sep 24, 2017 1:52:10 PM -04:00
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

forgive me cuz this is my first character critique I've done! I'll try to be as official as I can without sounding stupid
I'll TRY NOT TO BE TOO OPINIONATED


Design: In my opinion I really like her design, her outfit works together nicely! But away from my opinion, everything seems fine even the colors, but I suggest maybe add more shirt and overall details? Like some stitching or buttons!
As for physical appearance I think it's fine! The style Is great and find by me! There may be some anatomy "issues" like the arms or noes but not everyone wants to draw realistically yknow? The arm size should however line up to the best of your ability if they're both straightened out. Plus the features you give to them feel free to stick with them! The character is fine! As for her weapon the slingshot it seems a little big... which is fine but unless it was a custom slingshot she or someone else made for her, or a slingshot used for different purposes and she decided to use it as a handheld slingshot, then I recomend you make it smaller OR give a reason in the bio why the slingshot is that size!

Bio: so far the story is great! The details are great and it's all very understandable!
Her name is great an unique! The only thing I don't understand is the Devil fruit section... though that could just be me maybe make it more understandable to people who don't know. HOWEVER, I would like to know how she got that scar on her leg.

That's about all I have to say about this... I'm not that good at critiquing but AY THERES MINE??? Ok well HHH HOPE THIS HELPED??
I really like the character though!